[HARD TRANCE] RiSC - 1st Production EVER!

Hallo all,

I guess i;ll do the usuall thing and say, "hello"

havent posted here b4, nor do I usually post anywhere im usually one of those lurkers :roll:

anywho, a mate and I started working on this track yesterday - it has only had a couple of hours put into it, what I want to know is are we heading in the right direction, or can anyone lend some constructive criticism on this production?
(ie; tips, things ive done wrong, improvements etc etc)

MADE USING: FLSTUDIO 5 (REASON running as slave rewire for percs :rambo: ),

**Please note, this song is no where near the finished product, not even attempted to be sequenced properly, only made it so that you could get the idea of where i was going with this*** :unsure:

hopes to hear from u soon!


cheers
RiSC
>>> members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

Not bad your going in the right direction but need to focus more on your production put a bit of delay on the leads and not much but a bit of reverb for the leads to make them stand out a bit.
It's also clipping in a few places concentrate on that as well best thing to do is bring it back when its finished mate.
Check out the audio out on this site.
www.reaperrecords.tk

awesome, cheers for the feedback mate! :lol:

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

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Originally Posted by WezEnTiger

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

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good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

melody is well random, if you dont how to write the keep them simple in the begging , its clipping so try and bring everything down abit, add some reverbs to most parts, makes it sound abit more real, not bad for a first time, just keep goign init :rambo:

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Originally Posted by WezEnTiger

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

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good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

not my tune dude !!!!!!!!

i simply redid the link for him so peeps can download it !!!!

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Originally Posted by dj vorny

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Originally Posted by WezEnTiger

http://members.optusnet.com.au/~linda.domingue/new.mp3

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good tune u done here wez sounds alot better than ur other tunes ;)

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:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

not my tune dude !!!!!!!!

i simply redid the link for him so peeps can download it !!!!

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i know wez mate i was joking lol
but this track is realy cool for this guys first track like cascade said the melody needs working on but its not bad at all so far :cool:

ive been real slack lately with listening to others ,

well

i say slack ,

zero time to write my own let alone listen to others i think ,

ive just downloaded everyones tunes from this forum from past month odd , ill give a few comments on them soon !

sorry peeps

Track seems to be real flat sounding with no atmosphere at the moment.

Levels are ok and the ideas seem pretty sweet actually.

Liking the melody work , again all seems a little flat and preset.

work on some sweet fx and some catchy small breaks to bring the structure up to touch and make it flow better , things are jumping out and biting ya in the arse !

Schweet so far dude