please dont mock me :(

i normally write dark or at least serious trance/techno but i thought id try my hand at something a little more...bouncy? :?

I know it wont be the greatest thing anyones heard but if anyone thinks it has any chance at all of ending up decent id liek to know then i might finish it.

Before u slay me , remove both hands and force me to french kiss a blender id like to point out this is the file after 40 mins of work and i dont belive i have written anything over a bpm of 135 before :(

enjoy...or fall of ur seat laughing at my expense the choice is urs :lol:

http://www.ninja19.free-online.co.uk...nshedTrack.mp3

the url would help :?