Uplifting trance not my usual style..............

Fruits Of Life!!! Can you tell me what you think constructive critisism is welcomed
cheers...............J.B
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yo, sorry about the late reply been busy mate.
this track sounds pretty fresh mate, abt commercial sounding but good.
What did ya use for this track?
some of it sounds out of time mate, the drums and samples dont sound like there together, try using some compression, maybe check what samples your using, sometimes theres gaps at the begging, so the samples never hit when the should.
i dont particularry like the vocal sample, the melody and chord sequence is abit repeative too, try changing some of them around later on in the track,
some more dynamics maybe, ? swooshes filters etc ,

anyways keep it up,
cheers
:rambo:

Using refx Vanguard, Absynth, Mda piano, and Triangle there's not a gap mate it's a phasing pad mate.
If you listen to it again you can tell the pad is actually phasing.

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