[Hard Trance] First track

This is the first track ive finished, (Mystery), i know its a bit cheesy but would like some feedback..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/sargentjmusic.htm

Appriciated.

Have just put another one on there, bit more hardstyley..
These are the first tracks ive finished, so some helpfull feedback would be good for me..
Cheeeeers big ears

SargeJ man , you have game , keep at it m8

Keep adding them layers , :wink:

Tester is #34 in the trance charts my son

WELL DONE! :D

Just uploaded ours , how long does it take to get approved sarge !

I think it says about three days but mine went in straight away..

Cheers for all the help wez have added few more layers now.

Yeh epidemic had a listen to crackin skulls, loved it, vocal is spot on, yeh mines gone up to 18 now!!?? I didnt think it would get that far..

No probs m8 , Samples should wing be wigning there way to ya now ,

How do ya get tracks in the chart then , !!!!!!!!!

nice one Sargey,

Youve done well gettin it that high, i think mine only got to 43 an its gone right down now :cry:

(wezentiger) As far as I know your track should automaticaly go in after a few days. Just keep checking the chart position option in your "band administration".

· #666 in the Electronica charts
· #110 in the Electronica:Trance subgenres charts

HAVING A ****KIN LAFF AINT THEY ! YOUR AINT EVEN FINISHED SARGE , HAHAHAHAHAHA

:lol:

I know mate its a bit weird, but yours has only been there about a day, give it a couple days..

Hi mate... I've been away from the board a few days... will check it out right now!

:)

Hi mate...

I split my response in to a positive and negative section... start with negative...

Negatives:

Samples & Instruments used. That's the only thing I think is wrong. They sound rather bland at the moment and dull which brings the track down. Some EQ work needs to be done to even out the high hats and percussion from drowning out the melody and the track.

Positives:

I actually really really the overall construction. It's put together very well and has a lot going on which is good. It has good ideas and flows well... it just needs the instrumetns/sounds used to be different to complement the good work with the structure. It's clear you've got a good idea of how to lay things out... I think it's just experimenting and finding the key to getting things to sound better... which takes time and tinkering but will pay off.

Overall:

Nice work. Good layout and design. Very neat and tidy work. Just need to work/find/use different instruments or samples to make it better.

Keep working man as you defo have good potential.

:)

Cheers mark, yeh the sounds are a bit shit but i havent really done any looking around for any, will be getting my act together now thanks the wezentiger for all the samples and software, cheers guys!

No problemo my friend !

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