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Funky techno,
Only just finished and this tune is looking for a home.
If ya like it please giv me some feedback or get in touch.
Thanks.
http://www.dervorsprung.com/digitalk...0-%20Kyoto.mp3
Digitalkiduk@hotmail.com or http://www.digitalkid.moonfruit.com
downloading, I will give you feedback shortly.
Nice job guys!!! This is turning out F*cking dope. I'm only listening in the phones, but everything seems well in place. I would really love to play this one out, this is guaranteed to rock the floor :clap:
My only suggestion would be to perhaps add some vocal stabs. That would go very cool with everything you have done already.
The tune is finished dude. :)
Thanks for the feedback, I did actually put a vocal in there but thought it seemed better without in the end.
Lookin to get this one picked up if not we will put it out on one of our labels.
Thanks for the feedback man. :D
either way it sounds wikked man, so if you tried it and it didn't sound good, don't mess with it.
I always say, don't fix it if it's not broken.
Deffinatly dude, im quite happy with it how it is now.:)
wikid tune man, really crisp on the overall sound. you got a simular sound as Cave, really chunky n funky.
yeah this is pretty nice man, my sort of tune!
nice one :clap:
hmm not bad, sounds very very dry tho, the bass and kick particulary. Some of the loop work is good, but that kick definately needs more processing, sounds really flat and boxy. The stab would benefit from some variation too gets a bit boring
nice enough track but would fare well from somemore eq and compression id say
hmm, I run reverb over the whole track and stereo panning so it shouldn't sound too dry well at least I hoped not.
Please remember also this is a 128k sample so it's losing alot of eq.
Thanks for the reviews though people much appreciated.
I like Caves stuff, Kobaya etc so nice to be compared to them as thats my kinda sound.
Thanks guys. :)
like the bassline - phat! reminds me of daniel vigorito but with more funk - sure it would be a good tool to mix with.
running a reverb and stereo field wont make individual sounds that are dry less dryer, itl simply just verb the whole mix up and may have an adverse effect to what you wish
nice track definately, just needs more processing imo
Phat bass in this but the production lacks real width and sparkle.
I agree with Eyes.
The kick could do with pushing through that huge bassline a little more effectively, it`s nice dry as it is I think, it`s got a very "real" feel to it, but could just do with a bit more oomph.
There`s an overall cardboard feel to this tune though, sounds very PC in the fact that there is very little warmth and sparkle.
Try running some effects through some saturation and valve emulation to add a little more dynamic activity and width.
As a tune I like it, but production wise it needs a bit more work I think.
Cool thanks for the input, I'll have a look at the things you mention.
Ta
Just a point though, I wanted the kick to sit as it is, its very easy to make a kick really punchy and have more oomph but thats not how I wanted it in this, I wanted it just sit solid but not take too much attention and thats how it is I feel.
The others bits about dry sounds which bits in particular would you say are dry?
This is cool.. I agree with some of the above statements though.. kick needs to rip thru the bass a bit more. The sounds in the midrange need to be a bit thicker too imho.
great track man.
i think the bass is a little loud.
yeah, that kick needs to come through some more, it seems to be flooded by that bassline
fix that and you have a sold track! very clubby
Thanks guys took ya advice on turned the bass down a little and sorted the kick, sounds better now.
Thanks all for listening.
The problem is, that the kick will just be buried and lack definition on a rig.Quote:
Originally Posted by Digital Kid
You can make it clearer without necessarily making it too prominent, with good eq work.
ah, I didn`t see the above comments, cool.