casual violence - entering the machine

http://www.rosenblatt-sf.com/Selecte...%20(7x5½).jpg
http://www.algorhythms.co.uk/allsort...%20machine.mp3

Somthing that on Saturday I was happy with and thought it was complete but as the week begins im not so sure.
maybe theres somthing missing and maybe theres a few holes in the production ,I dont know.
I could realy realy do with some helpful and truthfull feedback and a fresh perspective.

BOYAAAAAH

and erm thanks ;)


oh and big big thanks to Detfella for the space....man(see what I did there)

Oh and thats a cool picture dont you think?

Was wondering what the deal was with people posting pictures to go with track samples?

just cause I can Dude :lol: and good pictures rock

yeah nice tune, production sounds good to me, i would vary some of the sections some more to give the track more flow and dynamic appeal. im not normally a fan of the pads/ambiences but i really like the chords you are using

really like the spoken sample, feel it could comeback in stronger for me

slow burner as well!! what tempo is it, feels like 133 or something

good job ste and np about hosting ;)

Cheers for listening Dan its erm 127bpm I think
I love slow grooves mate.

love the hats, they sound mad, kind of sounds like someone dropping a load of spoons on a tray but with a rhythm to it :lol: :cool:

over all the production sounds ok to me, maybe ad a bit more mid with some extra percussion.

nice structure though, different, the way it fades in and out in places

this is cool man.. deepndark as fuk. ive only listened to it on crappy earfones, but everything seems kosher!

nice

really digging this man.. excellent

Yeah Steve I'm liking this one for sure. I downloaded it yesterday homie, but am really re-listening right now. Nice one for sure, but I do agree that it could come in with more impact some how after the break...but all in all well wikked track. Maybe add or change a pattern after that break to give it just a little more movement.

B

Dope one dude!!!!

love the kick and lows on this one... really heavy!!! highs are sounding cool to me as well!!!!

get me those samples !!!

:rambo:

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Originally Posted by lau

Dope one dude!!!!

love the kick and lows on this one... really heavy!!! highs are sounding cool to me as well!!!!

get me those samples !!!

:rambo:

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Ive got em here now if your online mate

Thanks for listening people and thanks for feedback :love:

Regarding the impact after the break maybe I'll have a play and see if I can do somthing.
Originaly it had more impact and more of a build up into the kick in but it didnt seem to suit the effect that I was after so I made it a little more about the vibe(thats what I tried any how)
Ill have a bash again maybe.


Cheers ;)

sounds sweet. like the submarine vibe. nice combination of smooth & crunchy noises. heavy stuff....

Cheers for listening j_s
I like submarines alltho I prefere German U-boats if im honest :lol:
thanks for feedback mate :love:

nice and dark

i love this track man

very good quality, non typical hard experimental stuff :clap: i like everything in this tune ! dark athmosphere, great vocal, shit this really should be on 12"

ohh now i have something in mind, there arent any ride cymbals in track, i think if you could used them the track would be better (imo) :)

great stuff !

Thanks for listening people.

will look it to the ride cymbal thang there is a place near the start of the track where it possibly needs an extra element(after the first deley type edit)
I tend not to use them most of the time tho(neither does Lau I think)

Also I must point out that this is a Lau and Casual violence track its not just me so Ive slapped my own wrist :doh: :lol: