This is my second production, would really like to know what you people think about it!
its quiet a big file so if u have broadband copy and paste the link and it should stream.
http://www.dorsetyouth.org.uk/dorche...am_machine.mp3
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This is my second production, would really like to know what you people think about it!
its quiet a big file so if u have broadband copy and paste the link and it should stream.
http://www.dorsetyouth.org.uk/dorche...am_machine.mp3
i found the riff very catchy indeed, this would get me moving in a club.
This version is a little quiet at the moment though, coulddo with being compressed and hats being made a little more prominent.
im not too sure about the kick drum rolls when they become very fine but the bass line is pretty rich :)
im curious as to what synth was used for the riff, it sounds quite nice 8)
Both the Bassline and the Riff are made on the Novation V-station ;)
cheers for ya comments :)
i thought it wasa novation synth, but i was thinking of the supernova, i have the k-station , great synths.
i aint had a chance to have a go at the v station yet.
Ive only started to delve into the whole world of synthesis recently, i have ownedmy k station for over a year now but for a large part of that time didnt have a clue how to use it, i just pissed about with the presets until a month or 2 ago.
most of the time im using vst synths which are good but im neglecting my hardware :cry:
im gonna get hold of a virus c in a month or 2 then use both of em for most things.
can u use v station patches on the k-station and vise versa?
i wouldnt mind that patch on my synth :P
I dont even have any hardware at all :| apart from me pc and midi keyboard.
i want a jp8000 :| :| :|
as for the patches mate i got no idea?...
Anyone else?
Man o Man !
This tune in my opinion can only be desribed in a few words !
****in wicked man !
The beat is offset , mint
The hats are perfick , mint
The breaks , mint
The melody synth , mint
I think the only work that need sto be done is Atmosphere ,
Lack a bit of body in the FX range , or maybe a few wierd vocals !
But so far 8 out of 10 , Wanna hear the finished version ASAP man
That beginning tune is haunting me in the humming and tapping of feet area !
Keep it up dude !
I dont lie !
Man o Man !
This tune in my opinion can only be desribed in a few words !
****in wicked man !
The beat is offset , mint
The hats are perfick , mint
The breaks , mint
The melody synth , mint
I think the only work that need sto be done is Atmosphere ,
Lack a bit of body in the FX range , or maybe a few wierd vocals !
But so far 8 out of 10 , Wanna hear the finished version ASAP man
That beginning tune is haunting me in the humming and tapping of feet area !
Keep it up dude !
I dont lie !
Dream Machine
HI FI (256kbs) MP3 | LO FI (64kbs) MP3
Theres 2 versions here, the Lo-Fi one is designed for peeps with a slowish conenction, 56k etc... while the Hi-Fi one should stream on DSL connection or anything over 576k
hey dan, i feel you give too much of the riff away at the early stages of the tune mate, its a bit too predictable after the break, a bit monotonous as we say, not to sure about the kick rolls mate, need a bit of sussing, bassline is pretty fat mate, nice synth aswell..as someone said, you need to layer your percussion a bit more give it a different feel at points, also another thing i disliked was that the bassline changes, theres a fee to many, although they follow the riff nicely, it sounds a bit offputting, beef up ya kick aswell mate, give it a bit of reverb maybe.
also try and filter down your riff at points to give it a bit more of an edge when it comes back in, play with your resonance a bit, albino all the way!