Fat Collective / L.M.I / Vitality.mp3

Hi folks, just finished this track, its a collaboration with Myself & Triple b (L.M.I)
hope you like it, you comments are welcome ;)

http://www.fatcollective.com/audio/distek/Vitality.mp3

Wayne it sounds like it would be a well nice DJ tool type on vinyl, but not much progression in my opinion. I like much of your work and you did get down on the edits with this one, but it just doesn't seem to go anywhere homie. That's just my opinion though, and everyone is differant.

What about me :cheese:

Loads of funky clunky percussion in this that all seems really nice, although I think the kick maybe dominates the track a little too much, when really the percussion should lead it.
Feels like a first draft waiting for all the main parts too.
Needs some more meat to go with the veg. Something to hold the attention, a synth, or (to follow a techno cliche) some kind of vocal, or maybe something metallic and screaming.
Nice changes, but they are a bit let down by the lack of substance.
Definitely promising though.
Nice influence showing here from triple B.

yeah, i agree, the kick dominates a little too much, needs the rest of the percussion bringing forward a little more, an it could do with something else to grab your attention, unless its meant to be a dj tool thingy