Feeback on my Hardtrance / hardstyle tune

Hi guys

If you could take the time to listen to my tune and give me some advice on things to add or take away before i mix it down

http://members.shaw.ca/djrichie_v/TuneA.mp3

mate, you need to make the file smaller if you want anybody to listen to it.

its 8 megs

OK you lazy bastards]
now it is 4megs

http://members.shaw.ca/richie_v/TuneA_Master.mp3