Here is a track ive started, not finished, feedback appriciated..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/sargentjmusic.htm
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Here is a track ive started, not finished, feedback appriciated..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/sargentjmusic.htm
Nice kick
really not crazy about those gremlin sounds
The tune sounds really empty like it needs something to fill the space
The ending is really abrubt. I am thinking this is just the file, IT is like you do the build up with the synth and just end it
what a strange track mate!
That would send afew people off their rocker in a club with all the mad laughing goin on. :shock:
Not much happening in it though except for on the breakdown but thats quite long an drawn out. My advice would be, try creating some synthy sounds/effects to put in every couple of bars or so to give it abit more dynamic. It needs something else to work around instead of just the crazy laughing
Dont like that klonky sound that comes in on the kicks after about 2 minutes, sounds quite messy on top of them but i wreckon if you play around with it abit soften it up or something, it may sound better. I know that that sound is important for the breakdown at the end though.
Verdict: it is sounding like a funny little tune, just bring some other sounds into it to give it more life.
****in love those gremlin sounds!!!!!!!!!!! Love what you did with them, obviously needs a bit more going on
sounds like youve got a lot of the structure down mate, just need to build up on it now. perhaps have a go at makin some interstin synth patches for leads/ambience etc.
Love the way you made the Laugh into a kinda percussion first of all then rolled it down to norm , then deeper , good idea !
The build is definatley coming on , and as your still working on it , its understandable there is no real body yet !
Its really needs that push , that summat special , then i think youll have a winner !
Keep it going matey !
:wink:
I know mate, thats just were i stopped.. Will kick in after that.Quote:
Originally Posted by RichieV
Cheers for feedback you lot, i know it still needs a lot of work, ive only just started it, and i have done quit a bit of experimenting with this one so will be taking some bits out..
Good advice.. :wink: