[hardtechno] "4 a.m. madness" new track

Hi all!
Here is link for my new track:

http://mp3download.myspace.com/index...p;fid=59487044

“4 am madness part 2”, [genre-hardtechno, 140 bpm, file’s bitrate 192 kbps]

Will be glad to hear your comments/ideas :)
Thanks.

eugene

this still needs some work, imho. the programming is quite stiff. some of the percussion could benefit from some groove/swing quantization, some variation in velocity, and some more variation in the patterns. the chuggy bassline (is it made from lo toms?) drowns out the kick, which needs more top end to cut through the mix.

it does sound quite full even though you aren't using many sounds, which is good. it means you should be able to use eq to trim down some of your sounds and give them more space to breath without ending up sounding thin.

Thanks for your attention, Evil G. Your comment is awesome, man. I'll work at this track and now have some ideas abt. what i need to improve :) Will post improved version.

you've got the ideas m8. you just need to learn how to get them down properly. loved the little reverse>stop edit :)

like G said ^^ it just needs a little work and a bit of a groove to it as it is quite rigid. it'll getthere though.

Thank you for comment, Rhythmtech :) Will try to put, let's say, more "colours" in this "monochrome" track ;)

Hi mates!
So, im reverting with reconstructed and updated version of my last tune. Some sounds and effects added...:) Not sure that its finished.
Below is the link:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1...11C6ONW2DOGNKP

Your ideas, as usual, welcome :)

eugene