Hard Tekno track - lewinskeee

http://www.cymaticsound.net/~lewis/lewinskeee.mp3

feedback appreciated unfinshed at the mo , cheers

Could go for a lot more bass here, and some more shimmer and glimmer in the top end... then try a multiband compressor on the mix.

thanks ill give that a try , def needs more bass i agree . cheers

yeah the ideas are here, i agree more bass then really get that mutiband pumpin

Cut down the intro I would say, first off. that kick drum sounds pretty ugly on it`s own, but works well in the mix.

As above comments say, work that bass man.

Nice funky groove when the metallic stabs come in.

The overall mix is a little dry and static. Sounds a little too digital.

I`d get some verbs and such into the mix, as well as some saturation and more work in the stereo field to give this more polish and warmth.

thanks for the comments i have spent a bit of time on improving this ill post it back up soon to see what u think , cheers

like some ideas in the track, like that metallic stabs and also groove is very nice,after while..
sometimes i think all those little edits are breaking the flow too much, dont know.
production part of thing doesnt sound the best, but could be good after some touches as already was said .. not bad track.