RSJ - Transgender: The Art of Living in Stealth [tuff]

http://www.chrome-metronome.net/stealth_master.mp3

i havnt completed a track in a while so i was happy to squezze this tranny out! any comments and pointers, append below!
thanks :)

Mate .... i've liked everything i've heard of yours so far.... and this is no exception

Loverly rythyms, loads of changes and just a splash of acid...... top stuff

Do you release much?

cheers force!! havnt released anything as of yet. im waiting for 10 tracks that im fully happy with before i start sending out demos. im on about 4 or 5 at the moment!! :)

thanks again for the listen mate, diggin your stuff too ;)

Very nicely done man.
Fun to listen to and carried itself throughout :)

nice track dude kept me interested throughout. sounds sweet :)

Great track man!!

Good shit Rory.
just keeps grooving along untill all the computer weirdness comes in and the synths.
Break is dope.
Need a listen at home to check production but sounds good here mix wise.

Quality.

Production is tight and clean.
Stereo field is filled up, cool background noises going on...
Kick is slamming mate, bet that would smack on a big rig
Acidy hook is original, slightly wonky and rhythmically interesting.

Can get a bit busy in the high end, there's a lot going on at times. Having so many elements jostle about can muddy things up a bit...
Loads of really cool elements, but might sound better if there weren't so many at once. You could give each one a little more focus and attention if you didn't have so many in the mix at the same time.
That offbeat grindy noise gets a little tiring - maybe its just a little bit too prominant. There's places where it drowns out the hats and cymbals completely.

This is a wicked little track with a unusual hook to it, I would strip it down a little and let each part shine through a little more.

Thanks Jay for the indepth comments. iknow exactly what your saying. i have real wispy highs in there and theyre taking alot of the space up in the high end.

thanks for the comments people!