[Hard Trance] track from me... can i have some feedbk plz!

http://www.aqur86.dsl.pipex.com/dan-...ction/pro3.mp3

Got up to the break and a few bars out of it...

comments suggestions please?

writing as i listen....
first thought.. bit "housey"...
build up to drop in could do with more...
bass-line when it kicks in is really mint (i've got good headphones on), nice and deep and good key changes.
breakdown: beh, it's too uplifting for me to comment on. wheres the stop button ;)

THe beginning hihats swing too much for a trance song. Just sounds weirds in my opinion. The 303 sound and the bass do'nt go along . You should at least harmonise them if it is'nt playing the chord root. The main melody is ok till the last chord of the phrase , this one just sounds way off, too dissonant for a euphoric trance tune. The beggining sounds exactly like dj passions tune kingstons kitchen but then you add that last chord that kills the euphoric feeling.

teh bass and the kick sound nice together but it does need a tad bit of eq. Also it has a very reason ish sound. Try using some nice plugins to make it sound nicer.

good effort mr t... ok... the acid sample has a delay on it which isnt the same bpm as your tune & that stood out for me loads.. i thought the hats were well grooving not quite your usual crunching trance percussion they def need some eq and maybe whack em through recycle to seperate the hits and sequence them in yourself, bass was nice and warm and the kick stayed pretty sharp... keep it up mate this producing lark takes a while you`ll soon suss it out! :clap: