Voices - New track

http://www.morepunkthanfunk.com/voices.mp3

New track, any comments much appreciated

ok.. first thing is the snare sound. dont like it at all.. too flat. i do like the 808 style beat though just a tighter snare would be nicer. love the synth that comes in, especially the dub delay on it. the low synth is nice and growly although could be a touch higher in the mix. the voices are interesting and not too overdone.

not crazy on the d'n'b style bass that comes in half way through (i think it fitted better in a previous track you posted).

over all i like about 80% of it. and its nice to see you arent afraid to try differant sounds and ideas. some of the synths sounds arent to my tastes but thats personal likes so not really relevent.. just that snare bugs me.

good work.

cheers for the comments, i see what you mean about the snare although i quite like it.

the whole track seems to be running down the middle till about the half way mark then all of a sudden it pans out into the stereo field. id perhaps make use of the stereo field at the beginning of the track and keep it consistant. wicked bassline. :)

Hiya m8,long time no post for me but think this deserves a comment. Like the style. Its a refreshing change to the usual grist that is often churned out. I like the whole breaks feel to this, reminds me of the plumps.
Good work geezer

Hush Hush..keep it down down...voices carry.

Sounds good to my ears!