Siege - System Germ [work in progress]

Came up with this over the weekend...still needs a lot more work, gonna add some more percussion elements,sounds etc..
Appreciate any feedback,ideas you guys got to offer..........
you like? no like?

http://www.7161.com/streamer.cfm?fil...track_id=13481

Think ive overdone the bottom end??

im only on headfones here ,but the low end sounds rock solid... (id have to hear on the monitors to say for sure tho).

more great wobbly tuff funk form you man, i like

Bottom end sounds very cool to me bud, will check at home later ya.
First groove is sound as ****, loving again the way shits bouncing and working off each other, as said will check it tonight on moniters.
sounds good so far.

Did you pass today or what skeez?

St john...cheers matey, value your opinion loads.
Ste....thanks also mukka...the tunes still early days..lot more work needed yet,just wanted to make sure the bottom was right before moving on to other parts. Glad you like....cheers

but did you pass today?

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Originally Posted by Mindful

but did you pass today?

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Test was yesterday ste.....no i failed..on some stupid mistake 5min into it.Knew id failed straight away,everything else went sweet...just that 1 f*ck up. Next time!!

aw man gutted.

ok back to your track...

really impressed, great use of eq on the synths and all round good groove, it's definitely a bit good... but I do think the kik has had a bit too much of a squash applied, there's just too solid a sound, with no character to it, for a track like this I'd say a bit more umph and less bang is required.

great stuff none the less.

Thanks for your comments mate,glad you like it......as ive said,still a lot more to be done.Was thinking of adding some nose to the kick,even it out a bit. Il repost when done some more.
Anybody else??

Hey man liking this a lot, all the little variations and edits are really good, all the sounds used fit together nicely. Don't think you've overdone the bottom end as such, but think you could do with making the kick a little less prominent and use some sub or bassline underneath it to fill it out a bit instead. Good work.

Thanks mark,appreciate the feedback.....working on it at the moment...post up soon.