First of all thanks JK and Judas Beast for the suggestions which are more than welcome.
Judas when you say try cutting all the top end of bass sounds and low of high could you spell it out to me in lamen terms. I know what you are saying probably couldnt get anymore complicated but what you have to understand is that up until this point i have had no input from anyone whatsoever, i just basically sat down by myself and started to try and create something, so any complicated or simple terms for that matter, go completely over my head. Anything i do know i have my own way of understanding it and what to do. ( if that makes sense )
Here is an updated version of my track once again. I feel there is definately more clarity within the track but would just like to know if there has been any improvemnts with the overall sound from someone who knows what they are doing.
Thank you
Doryl Roy
http://rapidshare.com/files/19870721...of_dreamsx.mp3