concrete shoes

something i finished last week, not groundbreaking stuff but feels like im coming along a bit production wise so im stoked with it.
any advise / comments / tips appreciated!
http://bad-robot.co.uk/concrete_shoes.mp3

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sorry edited it now, should be there

Cool man, production sounds pretty good. Like the percussion sounds at the start. Not exactly my cup of tea but good work.

Production is pretty sawwweeet. Instantly sounded 'pro' to me. The tune is well nice as well. Maybe tone the highs down a tad bit but only if you want to. The kick is nice and thumpy. Well done. Esp liked the 'white noise with vocals behind them'-part.

Edit: Mebbe add some more real (!) sub weight to either bass or kicks, sounds a little like maxxbass in bizness.


Still fat as **** this tunage!!!!

you know, i really liked this..

i don't think you can go much further with this...

it's a b side track though... if i were you, i'd leave this and move on..

good track!

well happy to read all that, glad your into it.

think im going to leave it as it is, when ever i go back into a track i always mess it up, and this is pretty much the first tune ive done i havnt gone off after a week, so ill leave it at that

thanks for listening

nice production....sounds wicked...nice one :)

i love it. love it . love it

good work. cant comment on production (laptop speaker) but the tunes great

i really dig the loop 3/4 way in with the voice behind the noise

keep it up

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sounds big! nice track man, I'm feelin the warehouse vibe here. maybe it's a b-side track as said above but def a really good b-side track.

not my cup of tea, but still good. interesting edits. nice.