When time divides

Here is another track I have done called when time divides. As I have said b4 and will always say up until the time comes when I wont have to say it is that I am under no illusions that what I have made is done to a good standard all I am looking for is some feedback from those in the know that are kind enough and who are willing to give it.
I believe there comes a point at every party when people just want there ****ing heads blown off and it is these types of tunes that I am aiming to make and hopefully sometime in the future I will achieve this. I believe if they can send a monkey into space then ill be able to make one tune that will blow people away on the dance floor by the time I die. As the saying goes ' this is only the beginning'. plz excuse the sample. From the start this was in my head.

Thank you
Doryl Roy

http://rapidshare.com/files/20835433...me_divides.mp3