New HArd Trance

This is a new tune im working on and would appreciate a bit if feedback!
Its more of a set starter tune but im really struggling getting percs that fit well so there isnt much in it!
Im new to all this so its not very well produced but any feedback or criticism on how to improve this tune would be happy days!

cheers for listening!

http://www.speedyshare.com/489989458.html

hello :hello:


not bad at all for a beginner (and dont think ime belittling you cause ime a relative noob myself :cheese: )

I think the kick has far too much bottom end and its dominating the rest of the track too much. also try using EQ to cut the bottom of your higher placed sounds (i.e. your ride cymbals and hats etc)

like the pads around 7:30 ish (reminds me of some of the stuff mzone plays) but again EQ your different elements.

maybe introduce a different synth to compliment the melody at some point as well and if your sequencer allows it try automating some parameters on your vst's (assuming your using vst's of course)

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Originally Posted by tonyc2002

hello :hello:


not bad at all for a beginner (and dont think ime belittling you cause ime a relative noob myself :cheese: )

I think the kick has far too much bottom end and its dominating the rest of the track too much. also try using EQ to cut the bottom of your higher placed sounds (i.e. your ride cymbals and hats etc)

like the pads around 7:30 ish (reminds me of some of the stuff mzone plays) but again EQ your different elements.

maybe introduce a different synth to compliment the melody at some point as well and if your sequencer allows it try automating some parameters on your vst's (assuming your using vst's of course)

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cheers mate, will give it a go!