http://www.acidtrash.net/tunes/blankhabit.mp3
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Just had a quick listen mate, its definately got ''something'', but the kick is totally swamped - to my ears anyway, by the other elements. Top end sounds a little harsh too. I reckon if you remixed it a bit there could be a good track on the go, but (to me at least) it sounds a bit messy and piercing.
Do a re-run and let us hear it man.