Dave Sweeney - Object One

New track i done..looking for feedback or abuse,advice.
cheers

http://213.129.73.14/users_audio/105...DA33933523.mp3

pretty nice track, man. i am liking all those little fm-ish lead sounds. nice glassy textures. bass is sweet too.
as the track goes, it needs some more progression imo, but basic idea is there so just few last edits and you are there. really nice track.
production sounds nicely tight and clean. it has the right depth when played loud,. nice nice.

Good stuff, got some beats, some melody and neat twists. I hear the kick about 2-3 db too loud, its swamping everything when i crank it.

cool track. nice mix and power!! could do with one extra percussive loop filling out the hi-mid region.

thanks for the advice guys.
i deffo be going back to this one now adding more mid freq and edits.
cheers

very nice mate! i like it.. I agree with the comments about the kick swamping the track a bit. Looking forward to the new version.

Nice tune matey!
Some nice synth work, and production sounds crisp and clear.
I agree, a bit more work, but what u have so far is nice.
good work you slag;)