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its been a long time since i post a new track
i start using sonar 7.02 producer edition recently , this is my first track there
i only listened this one on my new Audio-Technica studio headphones...
all kinds of feedback are allways welcome.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/12343421f8eae98c/
lookin forward to this elvio..
firstly i think the overall thump of the track could be a little louder.. not sure how or if you mastered it but i all seems very flat, i'd personally put a mix bus compressor on with a short delay to give it a little more bouncey feeling overall.
hats seem a little thin, like they've had all the bottom eq'd out. while its obviously the right thing to do as the lows take up much needed space, i think you may have went a touch to far as they dont cut thru the mix now. they just kinda fizz about on top of it.
bass is fine. it works around the kick drum nicely.
i do feel the kick could have a little more oomph to it though.
i also think it needs a hook to bring it out of loopy territory.
overall the production is very good for a headphone mix but i think it needs a mix onn monitors just to iron out a few issues.
thanks rhythmtech , very nice review ;)
my next step is buy some monitors... cheap ones to start...
nice mate. some quality ideas going on! loving the bassline!! progresses nicely and doesn't get to hectic which I like.
agree with rhythmtech though, it does need a little bit more punch/aggression.
but overall mate I'm impressed!
thanks ORIS ;)
Nice tune....like the sounds youve used and the little vocal snippet. Arrangment works well...just get the pointers already mentioned sorted and its nearly there......good work;)
thanks Siege
link down , i will post another one when i finish the track ;)