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ok people heres a hardtrance tune im working on its on sound click :clap: :clap: its got a phat acidline in it after main break an pichin up an down random i like it see what u think any feedback is much apreciated :lol
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/vornymusic.htm click that or my banner ;)
checked it out vorny, your definetly progressing man this is pretty cool, look like your gettin to grips with vst plug ins nicely too, love the squelch you did with the acid line towards the end, with a few touches here and there i reckon youl end up with a cool track :cool:
give it more percussion, pan some hats out and get a nice rhythm going with them all, couple of crashes in carefully chosen places wouldnt go amiss either. i think if u just add some more layers and fill the sounds out a bit more youl be sorted :)
keep it up vorny :clap:
Good work Vorny, this is the first track i've heard by you and i can tell that you put alot of effert into your music. I like the sounds you used in this track, they all go well together. Keep up the good work :)
Youre getting there vorny! keep @ it mate!! by the way my kid loves xmas hardstyle lol :clap: :clap: :clap:
This is very well made. Progresses very well in my mind... builds up nicely and keeps the dark level at all times...
Very eery and spooky... like that feel. The acid use is smart on this too, good eq balance through out this tune.
Good effort man. Looking forward to more from you man!
not bad mate, needs sprucing up a bit in my opinion though. nice kick & bassline, i like the drum fills, really like the acidline (spot on) and nice use of various samples throughout. your levels were spot on too.
now, i dont like how u use the cymbal sound early on, before changing to hats after a reverse. also the hats were used very briefly, and the majority of the track went without them and suffers in my opinion. not overly keen on the riff either(i think u need to develop a little more intrest, just a personal opinion mind)
some good points & some bad for me. like greg said just needs tidying up a little, and u could have a good number on your hands.
hey mate!. i love the kick and bass, and i love the way the tune starts, but it gets a little bit messy in places, stops and starts too many times at the begining, and the riff is a bit trippy too. the acid works well, i think you should have kept it slightly simpler maybe, ummmm it could be very good indeed! ;) :clap:
thanx for the feedback people ;) i recon im gonna extend the track an like carl said it does stop an start a bit at the start :neutral: im gonna add some more percusion to fill it out a bit an a few crashes :twisted: i will let u know when i upload the new edit :cool:
vorny mate , I like the stop start beginning , its different ;)
could do with being a bit longer , and the outro seems a bit to sudden if you know what I mean
love the tweakin acid !!!!!!!!!!!
Its a class tune by u vornie m8,similer to uberdruck with the use of the acid sounds and the mad bass line and shit.always look forward to listenin to ur next tune vorn ;)