Fil Devious - Cranked, new track i've been working on...

hi this is a new track me & a mate have been working on, any advice, tips is greatly appreciated, cheers guys.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/qtzmt6

i like this. i reckon the melody could come out a little more, i like the way the kik drum bangs out

This is top Fil. You have progressed a LOT since your first one! Keep at it matey. I will give it a proper listen later on fella. :-)

thanks for listening guys, filthmonger i'll have another listen & see what i can do with the melody.