[HARD TRANCE] - New Tune " I'm About to "

I'm working on the final mixdown of this tune and i would love ot hear your opinions!!!

follow the link!!
http://www3.telus.net/public/joanmey/I::mAboutTo-03.mp3

I rly like that m8 loadsa energy in that tune..

Very well put together mad track :twisted:

thanks

anyone else have any tips ?

here is the revise version


http://www3.telus.net/public/joanmey/I::mAboutTo96.mp3