Need comments

I need some comments on this dark minimal techno project...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1p7gAn6BYY


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VEGIM

nice tune mate. Dark. just the way i like!

Thanx Danny.
Anyone else... ?

man i'm a big fan of your sound you know. this was ok for me. nothing stand out, but then again really nice production, very sharp stops and starts with a nice energy behind it all. a kinda sunday night after party vibe for me.

Thanx Mark.
It means...
Wanna push this project also... As we have enough time to make music. :)

Hey mate,
Sounds very good and is really well produced.
I also love the way you sequenced it!

loving it.

nothing sunday night about it to me. i'd shake my fat arse to that on any floor on saturday night mate:wink:

yeah liking this..a dark, building, ass shaker to get down and dirty too..very tight production also - sounds great even through me ikle logitec PC spackers.

would like to hear thorugh a fat stack!

Should this not be in the production section?

Hmmm tune does the same thing pretty much all the way through.
Needs more variation, depth and something to hold the interest past the 2 minute mark, cos I already knew what was gonna happen for the rest.
Also very shallow low end, and overall lack of warmth. Mix seems a bit too cramped into a narrow band of frequencies, could be opened up with more sparkle and separation in the top end, much more depth in the lows.
Mix seems crushed as well.

It's on youtube though, Steve. Thats gonna impede the sound.

Doesn`t change the overall dynamics that much though

True true, but it muddies the sound something chronic.

I like it, but I do think it needs more bass/low end. That could add to the dark sound of it and boost the track a bit.



@ Vegim - I bought the "I love Techno 2008" track the other day. Is more melodic/dancey than what I'd normally listen to, but I really like the break on it, when the vocal comes in and the synth sounds go a bit twisted. Nice work!

Thanx to all of ya for comments and time to listen.
@Teknorich - thanx mate...