work in progress

http://goventures.com/moe/01.06.04mp3.mp3

be kind.. still working :rambo:

sorry mate cant listen to it untill the weekend but i will offer my comments then. :lol:

sorry at the mo im at work will have a listern at home later ;)

i like the atmospherics and synth sounds a lot, but the drums could use some more signal processing. the loop is pretty strong though...any idea how you want to proceed with this track from here?

definetly some potential here, i agree with the above comment that the percussion needs some processing.

very nice. But like all said percuss's too dry

thanks for all the feedback imma try out some new efx on the drums :) i have some more droning noises i wanna put in and im trying my hardest not to put in a ride cymbal :-p

http://goventures.com/moe/01.06.04-rough.mp3
beefed up the drums (thanks for the tip slavik) :lol: and changed around some of the sounds a bit

sounding good so far, all very midish though, needs more in the higer freq range