Scott Gray - A Deeper Nation

hey peeps, check out this track ive been doing over the past few hours, deep, pad-dy groover

http://www.iterativemusic.com/~scott...per_Nation.mp3

il work on it some more tommorow but here it is for now, lemme know what u think peeps

nice groover. reminds me of some old broom pure plastics, but better! maybe chop the 16 beat hat around a little, just coz thats the only thing that stands outl.

thanks dude, much appreciated! :)

Production is ok.
Just reminds me of long tired and tested waters of mills era detroit techno.

nice dark atmosphere. cool track :)

appreciated peeps

just updated it

see what u think ;)

Detroit to the core...

not my usual bag. though i will say i think the strings overpower the bass & drums a tad too much. but thats jus a personal thing on my account..



percussion is very authentic detroit.. ie:jus a 909 :lol:


good work my Gray :clap:

Mr not *my*

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hahaha thanks dude :)

Yeah, this is cool but it's so focus around the strings they need to be absolutley amazing sounding.

not sure I can think what perfect thing to do with them would be but something that keeps them pretty dry but adds some detail or interest would really benefit.

maybe you could seperate all the chords, record them as samples and chop from one to the other like it's three samples rather than three chords on a synth. That'd probably make it seem dryer if anything then you could add a bit of the perfect delay or reverb and maybe it'd become a fascinating thing ... dunno, that's my thoughts anyway.

whats this track made on btw ?

good old Fruity Studio

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Good Work Fella :lol:

cheers dude, gonna have another fiddle with it tommorow and see if i can sort it out a bit more

Great work. I love the overall feel of the tune. Reminds me of the old saftey session record on drumcode. Very much some deeper soulful stuff!!! I think the drums are a bit lower than the synth, but that should be an easy fix. All in all though, excellent work and a great choice in sounds.

very detroit sounding stuff, i like the bassline in there too, the strings are pretty cool, maybe work on those a little more, throw in some filtering, bring out that bassline some more hehe

thanks for the comments, but it just so happens ive changed it completely haha, became really unhappy with the strings and pads and changed them, kept the bass and percs tho

check it again, same link

http://www.iterativemusic.com/~scott...per_Nation.mp3

good or bad comments, let me have em!

I think that all in all the levels are much more balanced now and that the tune overall sounds very differant. Although I think I preferred the old one a bit better myself as far as style is concerned. Still acceptional work though. :clap:

thanks very much dude :)