This is a head wreak :rambo:
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/3705.MAwav.mp3
Constructive feedback welcome
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This is a head wreak :rambo:
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/3705.MAwav.mp3
Constructive feedback welcome
Nice one.. love the congas and the skippy beat. :clap:
file not found, so i went ahead and listened to 37_06.mp3. the percussion and all the crazy sound fx sound awesome. i like the synthy parts too. are you planning to add any more synth parts? it does seem like you lose a little bit of continuity when switching between the synth driven parts and the drum driven parts.
neway, keep us posted. lovin it so far.
:shock: :lol:
I see what you mean with the changes. I think I solved that problem a little with this newer arrangement. Let me know.
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/37_7MA[128].mp3
Maybe I should make it easier to mix?
wicked! that nasty distorted part is holding it all together nicely now. this is sick. :)
http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/au..._09MA(128).mp3
Open to suggestions. My biggest worry is that its too hard to mix?
na. you foreshadow your changes pretty well and the beat is always clear against the craziness.Quote:
Originally Posted by The Divide
i would totally buy and play this.
only suggestion i can think of is that it could use a little something leading up to the drop at 4:00. (love the part after it comes back in, btw).
nice. not too much into offbeat stuff, but this is ****ing well produced,., i love the breaks and the crazy synths in it,. i like this,.
Glad you said that. Yea something to break it down better. I guess I need to work on a new section there which compliments the main peak that doesn’t loose as much bandwidth & energy.Quote:
Originally Posted by Evil G
Thanks
Possibly theres a hole somewhere in the lower mids too
this would seriously mess with your head on a big rig, great stuff
The production on this is fantastic.
The beginning is so promising. Proper industrial.
But the track seems to lose energy and drive really quickly.
As a dance track this doesn`t really work for me as I keep waiting for some dark vocals to come in, to add flow to the song like structure.
Can you sing?
What is this pop Idol or something? Can I **** sing man :lol:Quote:
Originally Posted by dirty_bass
maybe drink 15 cans of stella and sing through a distortion pedal? :lol:
i've actually had people say the same thing to me - that the structure of my tracks seems to beg for a vocal. the whole songs vs tracks thing, i guess.
i'm no producer, but i like this alot!
Still working on this. I thought I would add some darker keys. Its not done yet but I would like to know if theres anything you dont like about this mix. Thanks for the comments so far
www.fobiddensilence.co.uk/audio/37_14ma2.mp3
damn this is dark and hard, good stuff, but it could do with something else before the break, maybe a vocal would work well with this :eh:
yo man...this is very very nice...i like it :clap: ...everything is the way it should be...don't change it !! :!:
:wtf: . . . WOW!!!! :love: That is what I want to listen to next time Im out grooving :dance: - pretty awesome!!
How do you do that ? . . .
makes me laugh inside as Im listening to it :twisted:
I am really glad its gone down so well.
I have one last question. Anyone know what label this style would suit?
Thanks ;)