Oujia blokes - Dipped in glass

Hi guys ;)

Me and my best mate Calvin have been making music together for ages now and have decided it was about time that we got a demo made.

We started the first track last night and this is what we got so far.

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2...X0MORNI2HEGPSH

We realy like it so far.

All feedback good or bad is extreamly welcome
thanks ;)

By the way ive put it up on yousendit so all you have to do is click on the link and it will take you to an idiot proof page with a link for the track on it.

Cheers :love:

sounds cool as **** so far homie. Please finish it so I can add it to the archives yo. Good stuff as always man.

Dude!!!

This is really really dope!!! Im on the headphones right now... but I guess Ill have to get used to that ;)

Phat beats... Will have to check the lows on my monitors tomorrow!!!

Maybe intoduce the beat a bit more spectacular( at 28 secs) .... try to create a bit more tension........ then drop it in fully!!!

dope work!!!

lau :rambo:

Ohhw b.t.w.

YOU SUCK :lol: :lol: :lol:




:roll: :eh:

this is some fine audio...

can't wait to hear the finished version guys.

good work really, waiting for the final ver. :clap:

and gimme some ride cymbals :lol: i love them :lol:

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Ohhw b.t.w.

YOU SUCK :lol: :lol: :lol:




:roll: :eh:

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Haha yeah I know mate :lol: .................Never on a first date tho :nono:

Cheers for listening guys :love:

@orac :lol: there may be the apperence of some rides in this one just for you mate.

Any comments on production anybody?Chris?Danny?
Would be very helpful :love: could realy do with some truthful sonic comments.

Do you think we have gone a bit mental with the bottom end?
Are the pads and background stuff loud enuff?

Ive also noticed that the snare dissapears when the kick and sub comes in.

Anybody see any holes?

Thanks ;)

huh.. this sounds phaat,. kick is really bangin on my monitors... agrre on that introducing beat on 0.28as Lau said,., production sounds quite nice.. maybe i would lower hats just a little bit,., :clap:

Cheers Bloodstar.
Think your right about the hats,Ill turn em down and will also look in to building up to the kick in too,alltho we kind of like the way it just comes in unanounced :rambo:


Thanks for comments.

cool sounds there, maybe turn up the kick slightly....

its big as it is...but i think you could big it up a bit more

and you might aswell big up yourself while your at it
;)

I pop this on when I get home ;)

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Originally Posted by xfive

I pop this on when I get home ;)

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good man ;)


And cheers stjohn im biggin up my chest as i type fella :lol:

File expired :doh:

tried downloading the link but page says 'link expired, Link expires after 7 days or 25 downloads' :(

:doh:

Ill stick it back up when I get chance.

http://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3...039VUPRPV3MYY1

Stook it back on yousendit.
We havent had a chance to work anymore on this yet but would still love comments especialy production advice.

Thanks ;)

This is great.
Really liking this.
I`d say there isn`t a good balance between the hats and the kick, so this relationship could be dealt with by taking the hats down a little.
Also the mid range percussion could do with more width and presence as it is a little sparse.
I`d love to hear the finished version when it is done, very spooky, good sci fi music.

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Originally Posted by V..

This is great.
Really liking this.
I`d say there isn`t a good balance between the hats and the kick, so this relationship could be dealt with by taking the hats down a little.
Also the mid range percussion could do with more width and presence as it is a little sparse.
I`d love to hear the finished version when it is done, very spooky, good sci fi music.

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Thanks V that advice more or less mirrors what I was thnking thankyou for listening.
Realy cool Aviter by the way.

What about that bass anyone on my moniters at a pisstakingly loud level it distorts(usualy they arent that bad at high levels)

This is nicely done but I think it needs some sub under the existing bass, as its a bit boomy right now.
Everything else sounds good.. it actually drops into a proper groove toward the end, so you just need some more length ;)

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Originally Posted by xfive

This is nicely done but I think it needs some sub under the existing bass, as its a bit boomy right now.
Everything else sounds good.. it actually drops into a proper groove toward the end, so you just need some more length ;)

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Thanks C your a jent more sub you say :shock: Thanks i'll look into that.
yep it deffo needs to carry on with thaqt groove for longer and have a few doubleing up tricks and edits thrown in dosnt it.

Good luck with the Singularity track by the way dude your track is very nice.
Im trying to get a free copy can you tell :lol:

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Originally Posted by Mindful

Thanks C your a jent more sub you say :shock:

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Aye it has plenty of boom.. but not enough hum :lol:

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Good luck with the Singularity track by the way dude your track is very nice.
Im trying to get a free copy can you tell :lol:

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Well thanks ;) heheh

I can't comment on the mix cause I'm in the phones, but the tune sounds really nice over all. Sweet Darkness :twisted:

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Originally Posted by Mindful

Thanks C your a jent more sub you say :shock:

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Aye it has plenty of boom.. but not enough hum :lol:

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HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM :lol:

cheers dude will get on that ;)

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Originally Posted by messanger

I can't comment on the mix cause I'm in the phones, but the tune sounds really nice over all. Sweet Darkness :twisted:

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Cheers for listening Brad.
Do you ever get any work done :lol:
What do you do dude that lets you listen to techno in work?