still in progress.not sure about kick.
opinions are more than welcome,specialy critism.
http://download.yousendit.com/1848B80B48EAD440
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still in progress.not sure about kick.
opinions are more than welcome,specialy critism.
http://download.yousendit.com/1848B80B48EAD440
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good advice needed!!! im not sure to the sound of whole project.
http://download.yousendit.com/100B313D238795AC
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i really dig this one
and i agree the low end needs some work
the kick sounds nice,
but i think the bass line is too loud
so try turning it down, or use some eq or side chaining
this will give your kick more definition
cool.usefull advise m8.iv changed it and it works smoooother now i reckon.kick simce to go above the bass now.
anythink else??? please
oooops.sorry.the link here
http://download.yousendit.com/2A31C1EF576010E8
yep it's better now imho
i would maybe try turning the bass down some more
or perhaps cut the low freqs on it
it's just eating all the space for kick
also cut some lows on kick
try mixing the bass in mono
somehow its more upfront than i think it should be
everything else seems great!
these changes should do.any more sugestions plz
http://download.yousendit.com/2E3A9A9868E16E3A
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500% better than the first one of this amigo. Especially enjoyed the new intro bits on this version. To me the kick still sounds slightly clicky...but the track as a whole sounds really good my friend. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great works.Quote:
Originally Posted by thomas_figo
thanx Brad.same as u im only on heads so get struggle with bottom end sometimes.but got brand new monitors on order now.cant wait.anyway,iv compressed kick and bass again.same compressor levels on both so should be sorted now.
http://download.yousendit.com/8DAEB23C777CCE0F
iv been workin on it.not sure if vocal is not too cheesy.i dont think it fits.really need advice on this one.whole track sounds very cheap to me.please help
http://www.speedyshare.com/855961625.html
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Personally I'd say lose the vocal, but I've never really been a fan of vocals in techno. The rest of the track is sounding good though.
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Originally Posted by thomas_figo
Well I have monitors, but I only have the net at work. So if I'm on BOA listening, it's with my headphones. But man I know exactly what you mean. I used headphones for years. Only had a decent set of monitors for about 6 months now.
Don't worry amigo. You've been coming along really nicely.
I wish that I could sometimes be more accurate within my feedback. But I do try.
Let me grab the final one my friend.
File expired mate
Can't give a good whirl
iv been workin on kick and whole bottom end.also used vocal.dont know if fits well. dont really into vocals in techno but this one's quite cool.or maybe not.what do u reckon?Quote:
Originally Posted by SummerOfSam
http://www.speedyshare.com/980116403.html
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I like it with the vocal more... You could work on mix a little more... Or you wanted to sound like that...
btw good work and I like it.
Vegim
man it's a good track like but the high's are really hurtin my ears. you need to back off on that 10khz + range, especially if ya wanna transfer to vinyl...
personally i would leave that vocal off and use another sound.. perhaps a stab.. but that's my own prefs..
:)
track has been pimped a lot.im workin on arrangment at the mo so miss some details.just wondering if sounds any good to you?
http://download.yousendit.com/19C87F8636415EC9
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just listening to last version. i like the idea,. when that vocal starts it is really nice. i am not too sure about that melody synth, but thats my taste.. production part of thing sounds bit weird to me. kick sounds dull and also hihats are overpowering the rest, imo. thats probably becasue you mixed it on headphones, as you said. personally i would go back, and mix again.. cheers..
cheers pal.iv got monitors but can use em only weekends so most of my time its heads.just waitin 4 weekeng now.take ezQuote:
Originally Posted by BloodStar
need advice again.workin on arrangement now but lost all ideas.anyone , plz
http://www.speedyshare.com/181773884.html
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track has changed a lot from a original one.it sounds to me like shranz now.
136 bpm, dirty and dark 4 by 4 with some break as well.
not sure if sounds good enought or shall i work a bit more on it.
any advice will be apreciate.
http://download.yousendit.com/B1211756085A9230
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nice sounds innit. if its mine i'd like to compress a little those synth lines witch are very tasty. or just level them to make bassline work brighter.
i'd also like to vary it's perc cuz it make's a little boring.
all in all interesting piece of work mate. I like this type of synths: dry, sharp, and industrial. keep beats rockin!!!
owww i dl latest version and i see you fixed those synths. cheers