Beat Theory - no title - looking for advice

[beat_theory]

Hello BOA

This is the first time to post here a song. I hope we can get some feedback how to improve this track.

thank you in advance

here is the link to the song

http://www.beat-theory.com/Beat-Theory-4th.mp3

:)

[MARK ANXIOUS]

REALLY love this. totally releasable as is. a brilliant a-side. job done mate. get on with the next

[MARK ANXIOUS]

i'll play this on the next boa radio show. can you email the track titles and shit to: info@blackoutaudio.co.uk :)

[beat_theory]

thank you so much Mark

we sent you an email.

[Alphajuno]

Very nice. The production is crystal clean.

If anything maybe a little too clean for my tastes... but you theres some great synth work and it all works really well together.

Please let me know what else your upto. You mind if i put this in my next mix?

[dirty_bass]

Yeah, nice stuff.
I`d say once everything is running the kick dissapears a little too much.
Maybe you can cut out some more space for the kick, and give it a touch more top end.

I`d say you could do with a touch more warmth in the mix, as this type of music tends to be quite saturated and this is just a touch too crisp and computery.
Maybe a little more in the sub area too.

Nice melodic stuff though.

[beat_theory]

Alphajuno, we have made only 4 songs so far. The other three can be found on our website. http://beat-theory.com

Dirty Bass, Thank you for your advice. We will try out your suggestions.

:)

[beat_theory]

a little bit revised version.

http://www.beat-theory.com/beattheory_sapphire.mp3

[loopdon]

Really really good stuff here. i salute you. Get this out asap!

[dan the acid man]

yeah great track, lovely stuff, i'd personally change the kick a little and that's about it, nice melodic music

[BloodStar]

nice melodic spacy track. i am enjoying, mucho. as for the production, maybe add more space for kick by eqing other sounds in low mid region. other than that, it is good track.

[Jay Pace]

Great stuff mate. Really liking my melodic techno at the moment. Good use of stereo, track is well structured and well balanced.

Great synth noises, would definitely offer them a bit more warmth though. Overall the track sounds lush but a little cold and clean. The kick gets a little weedy in places as said before.

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Just listened to the updated version, missed that.
Much more warmth and depth. Good work! A bit brittle in the high end though, might want to smooth it out a bit up there...