Quote Originally Posted by SummerOfSam
My personal opinion is that it is borderline recreating the Chris McCormack Remix to Sigue Sigue Sputnik.

The hats need compression and a bit of filtering on a rig it may shock the eardrum. The guitar needs more sinister tones layering and throw some reverb on it other wise you just have guitar stabs. Maybe a lil delay on the alarm give it a softer more ominous tone.
It's not bad by far better than a lot I've heard. But these few points I feel would make the song easier to digest.
which one sounds like that mccormack remix? (havent heard that tune myself to be honest, so its purely incidental)

ill give all those suggestions a go later on! nice one :)