took a listen as well

The bass in this song is non existant . Definately needs some low end boost .
The sounds are too thin
I find the kick does'nt have enough bottom end
When the drums disapear , the track just sounds way too empty. I think having some ambiant layers of percussion would color the song alot more.

ON a melodic note , i find the bass line and those GM Bell sounds way too dissonant for me . Going from a perfect 4th to diminished 5th over the root chord just sounds weird . But they disapear so iguess it is'nt too distracting.

rythmically , the drums don't groove at all. I can see how you might want to keep them simple with all the synths playing around them but i still find them way too straight and unsyncopated . THat speaks for the groove in general with this song ; way too quantisized.