i liked some of the atmospheric sounds in the first half, but the bassline needs some eq to prevent it from masking the kick drum.

i liked the second part a lot more. the percussive sounds that came in about half way through were nice. reminded me a little bit of plastikman "minus orange". i think the second part has potential if you build on the percussive elements.

the change between the first and second halves was pretty drastic. was this a bridge from one track to the next, or a track by itself? there's always a comprimise with change, isn't there? not enough and people complain that it's boring, too much and they complain that it lacks coherence. just right, they dance.

cheers