I actually like Desert Rust a bit more....
Steve... I think the production on these is exceptional as always, but really, does trying to gear towards the commerical side need to lend itself to being formulaic? These tracks don't really jump out at me as anything fresh, both in elements used and in structure.
And it may just be my particular tastes.. so take it with a grain of salt... But I would like to hear your thoughts of the "commercial" side of things.

Cheers,
-Chris