getting there now man, production has come one leaps and bounds this last year..
ok, so the overall sound is much improved - the size of the sound has grown but there is still plenty of space.. obviously a few individual parts need a tweak (kick, hats etc) but its heading in the right direction.
love the main synth, nice old skool vibe, i think it would go down well.. BUT.. i dont think it works with that bassline - its far too flat, whip a funky bassline in there and it will be really going somewhere..
Im pleased you have managed to get a bigger sound on the bass though man, but i think this style of bass would suit a harder track or a clubby marco bailey type thing.
have a fiddle with the bass and post it back up - i'd like to hear the lead and the bass working togethor as a team in a track like this, so really try to program somthing funky around that old skool synth.