Some nice sounds in there, but I think the kick is too overpowering when it comes in, I'd also think about changing the kick slightly, not sure if it fits entirely. Also the first hat at 50 secs isn't particularly effective (The 2nd is grand though) and sounds slightly out of time with the kick, I'd think about introducing something else at 50 secs or thereabouts other than that hat... After the break things do sound a lot tighter, and it does intensify well at a few points, the last minute could do with beefing up slightly, that little acid bit from earlier or something similar could help to take the monotony out of the main riff as it does seem to run for a little too long on its own. Hope this helps...

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H3lx - 1.618

147bpm technoey stuff, not totally finished coz i want some feedback first to see what people reckon about it as it stands, and then polish her and take all the feedback onboard

its a bit noisy

you chaps seem to be an awful lot better at this production malarkey than me so feedback greatly appreciated pwease

cheers