i finally got back to work on some choons.
take a listen and let me know what you think.... any feedback is GREATLY appreciated.
i need it to improve ;)
click 'ere!! --> http://www.soundclick.com/djskron
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i finally got back to work on some choons.
take a listen and let me know what you think.... any feedback is GREATLY appreciated.
i need it to improve ;)
click 'ere!! --> http://www.soundclick.com/djskron
it reminds me of the old RMB stuff a little, id eq the quieter kick so it fits a bit better as the kicks are phasing in and out slightly, i really like your sequence though man and some of your sounds are kind of minimal but work really well, i think you just need to emphasise the percussion a little and touch up your synths a little, stick a reverb tail on that crash befoer the break so it slides into the melody.
the bass line sounds nice but you have room to boost the bottom end a bit.
i really like the minimal sound of it though, reminds me of the older melodic trance productions i used to love id take that synth down an octave that comes in at 3:39 and see how it sounds, feels a little to high pitched at the moment.
Any chance i could do a remix man?![]()
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i'd have to agree with all the comments above.
the bass is a little weak sounding. could maybe do with more reverb on the crash as well as it kinda stops to suddenly after it ends and doesn't fade into the background.
nice riff and that though. it needs more punch when it kicks back in too, but once u toughen that bit up a bit and lower the synth (as EC said) it'll be a cool tune.
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awesome..
thanks emo & ed
definetly had the same thoughts about the buildup and bassline...
the crash does cut to quick... i'll polish that up a bit.
any ideas for the bassline?? i've tried a few things but nothing pans out..
i'll drop the synth an octave and see what it sounds like
maybe try some other sounds for percussion and see if i can get a stronger sound.
aye emo... you can definetly take it for a spin off. love to hear another take on it...
thanks again :clap: ... i'll be back with an update