Would appreciate some feedback...

**The Divide** · 13-07-2004, 03:04 PM

www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/32F01tuff.mp3

Just going to take a break for this, would be interested in any advice/comments anyone has to give. I will come back to it later today. Cheers

**Tiptoe** · 13-07-2004, 03:59 PM

as you know mate i don't produce myslef so am not the best man for advice but i think you should make the kick drum a bit tuffer through the middle of the tune. sounds a bit weak to me. Think it would give it a bit more oomph like the last 40 seconds.

**Col** · 13-07-2004, 05:54 PM

very raw. reasonably cool, but i think its just lacking that bit of excitement.

**dan the acid man** · 13-07-2004, 08:07 PM

i personally think the kick sounds ok, it does seem to lack something though, what, i couldnt tell you, it just need's something else in there to give it a little push along

**Tiptoe** · 13-07-2004, 08:10 PM

yeah its just lacking something. I thought it was the kick in the middle of the track but you guys know more

**The Divide** · 13-07-2004, 08:48 PM

Cheers guys. I will try and sort it out. Your right

**The Divide** · 14-07-2004, 08:43 PM

Still a bit more to do on this. Gonna have a break and a smoke now

http://www.forbiddensilence.co.uk/audio/32F5MA.mp3

**Mika Silo** · 15-07-2004, 06:07 PM

very nice! i love the percussion :) very cool sounds used too! the only I would change is making it kick in fuller in the low at 1:51, like how it kicks in at 2:46.. if you know what i mean.. well it doesn't really matter :) Great track mate :clap:

**The Divide** · 15-07-2004, 06:10 PM

Cheers man.

**dan the acid man** · 15-07-2004, 11:48 PM

it's heading in the right direction, it just need's piecing together a little more i think, just so it flow's a little more if you know what i mean

**The Overfiend** · 17-07-2004, 06:02 PM

Danny like I'm telling everyone I can't wait to hear the new poo!
I'm just waiting for these roomates to get thier kaka together withm the lease so I can get my cable Modem n such!