Like the general feeling... I jus yhink the first synth which is a bit like a church organ u should maybe switch 2 a more swirly/ slide synth sort of old Plasticman stuff .. the bell sounds also think should have a longer fade in... I like the funky congas but the general verb shounds a bit 2 square.. I would have used a bigger ver with a little more HPF and LPF.. 2 kinda give it dimention with out have such a recognizable size room...

Just my ruff comments with no iccing suggar!

I do like the track do.. nice mellow smoth sound...

yeah the water is a bit overdone in some places (instead use a noise osc heavy modulate the filter with lots of resonance. Use a rnd slowish LFO 2 do it... add lots of verb and delay... .... If u prefer u can use a 2nd lfo with a triangular wave mod the cutt-off)...

my 2 cents..


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