Crazy track.
I like this, very different, yet still accessable.
The kick could be just slightly clearer and brighter.
All the mid range is quite upfront, but it works, it`s the most important area and most neglected, but you`ve filled it nicely.
The top end is a little soft, and could be just a little sharper, especially as if cut to vinyl, it would lose some edge, due to the restrictions of vinyl.
Maybe just a little more bottom end roundness as will.
I think this is a wicked tune. Very moody and atmospheric, but with nice busy mid range percussion.
I think basically it just needs to be made a little broader in the eq. ie a bit further into the high and low frequencies.
The verb is nice, I cranked this on the studio rig and the mids cut through it nicely.

Bloody well done mate, vinyl worthy I reckon :clap: