I really really like this.
This could be wicked, but you still need to rework a little. There is a bit too much reverb as dan has said, it`s pushing everything into the distance.
Also the kick is too loud in the mix, and could have a bit more mid range to it, to stop it from sounding so muffled.
Knock the reverb down a bit, to bring all the percussion more "in your face" retouch that kick, and I reckon you got a real solid, dark track here.