charlton offbeat track

[charlton]

http://www.charlton.nl/media/dj_char..._29-7-2004.mp3

[jesus]

not bad. first thing i notice is that the kick is a bit thin and not very bassy. also the hihat on the 8 gets a bit annoying. i like the arrangement though, always something go9ing on. you probably need some more layers too, like perc and synths.

[dan the acid man]

i agree with jesus, the kick need's more bottom end, and the mix need's filling out a little more, i would also add a little variation to the shaker/tambourine

[charlton]

thanx for your feedback i gonna work on it ;)

[Col]

very clean. some nice variation & ideas in their too.

it really needs thickening up in the low to low-mid department though.

[Basil Rush]

What speakers are you using? As everyone's said much punchier kick would be good. If you want that tap tap tap sound then rather than eqing the bum out of the kick try using some compression with a ratio of about 4:1 on a kick that sounds pretty cool to start with ...

[Lorenzo_Shivu]

i like this very much. Allthough I agree 'bout' the part of equalizing. Thicken the bass a bit and this will go mad at the parties!

[dirty_bass]

If this is meant to be glitch techno
then it`s cool as it is, maybe bringing the top end down a little to equalise things.

If this is meant to be a bit more pounding then I agree with the guys about beefing up the kick.

Either way I think it works well.