This is very strange. I`m not sure what to make of this, but it`s certainly different.
The kick needs to be a bit more upfront.
Generally the track feels unbalanced with a bias towards the top end.
Wack a spectragraph over it and have a look.
The mid range could do with more separation.
hmmm, yeah, I like this. It`s kinda laid back, and groovy.
Also, I`d use a different bassline. the offbeat hard house oompah is a little overused these days.