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    Default Naabo - untitled techno track

    Hi, here's my simple looped techno track that has grown since the frst outline made more than one year ago. It's not as big as some production posted on this forum, but it's a start. Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks

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    this is pretty good, i like the mettalic sounding synth :love:
    the kick and bass sound a little muffled though
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    this totally had my head bobbing. it might need some more bass, but it's definitely got potential. it pounds quite nicely.

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    Thanks for the coments guys, they were really helpfull. The bottom end really needed treatment. I tried to fix it, so here is the result, let me know what you think. It's improved a bit, but needs some extra work. Thanks again

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    i like this, nice deep groovey feel. all the drums & perc fit very nicely. maybe i'd like to hear the bass sound change at some point (even opening the filter)

    good work fella!

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    there's still something i dont like about the kick, it cut's through the mix nicely, but there's something not right about it, i dont know what though
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    Thanks for the feedback. I'm not really shure either how to fix bass & kick so i might even start building them from scratch.

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    I like this. I agree that the mastering is not spot on, but the groove is good!
    keep on it.

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    nice and banging mate ;)
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    You've got it right, the track was actually not mastered (mostly due to poor working conditions, which is very frustrating). Thanks for encouraging me.

 

 

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