[mp3] THE PILL

[jaqbip]

http://www.jrk.pl/jrk_the_pill.mp3 :-)

Any feedbacks are welcome...
BTW i'm still waiting for some feedbacks for the new version of Interval :-] :

http://www.jrk.pl/jrk_interval_new.mp3

Greets from Poland :-D

[dan the acid man]

i'll have a lsietn to these tonight when iv'e got some spare time, they are taking too long to buffer, but iv'e got loads of spare time later

[jaqbip]

i'll have a lsietn to these tonight when iv'e got some spare time, they are taking too long to buffer, but iv'e got loads of spare time later

Okay, i will be waiting :-D Thanks.

[detfella]

i listened to pill:

i assume the intro is there for ease of mix for djs cos it starts quite simple. i like the metallic sounds, not so keen on the bass sound or rhythm, personally i try and avoid any offbeat basslines.

enjoyed listening and pretty interesting track, could u maybe condense the 9mins into 5/6mins?

keep it up!

[jaqbip]

i listened to pill:

i assume the intro is there for ease of mix for djs cos it starts quite simple.

Yes. My idea is to easy mix this track with another one ;-)

i like the metallic sounds, not so keen on the bass sound or rhythm, personally i try and avoid any offbeat basslines.

enjoyed listening and pretty interesting track, could u maybe condense the 9mins into 5/6mins?

Thanks for this feedback :-)
I have an shorter (6 mins) version - http://jrk.pl/jrk_the_pill_short.mp3

keep it up!

I promise to do this :-D

[dan the acid man]

The Pill,
im not keen on the bassline either, a more rolling bassline would probably work better with this track, it would help it flow more smoothly.
Technically the track sounds pretty good

Interval,

The percussion that is in from the start is really good, im not sure about that bass synth noise though, although the effects you have on it sound pretty nice.
The pattern that comes in at 2.09 works brilliantly

Overall the track is really good, although personally i would try a different bassline

[jaqbip]

The Pill,
im not keen on the bassline either, a more rolling bassline would probably work better with this track, it would help it flow more smoothly.
Technically the track sounds pretty good

Hm, okay. I'll try to make other bassline for this track, when i have some time to do this.

Interval,

The percussion that is in from the start is really good, im not sure about that bass synth noise though, although the effects you have on it sound pretty nice.
The pattern that comes in at 2.09 works brilliantly

Overall the track is really good, although personally i would try a different bassline

Thanks for your feedbacks and your time spend to listen this tracks :-)
I will focus my attention on your hints when i'm going back to re-edit this projects.

Greets :-)