im not into dark summer but highlights is pretty interesting man, youve got quite a lot going on there and some good elements, it just needs to pound back in after the breakdown. the track seems to stay pretty level throughout.

Squeeze that kick up with some compression and get it punching through and id eq the vocal sample in the break too, get rid of some of the bottom end from it and maybe get clever with a little reverb and space it out a bit.

i reckon youve got a good track layout there though u just need to take control of it and bring everything out into its space