Listening to it right now, there seems to be a problem with the
kick/snare placement. When the break comes around you can
hear the problem just about clear up. I think that the initial layers
perc/loops/vox sound fine, just gotta get that kick sorted.

I like a lot of the stuff in the background, the hi-hat loop sounds
okay from what i hear, just off kilter because of the aforementioned
kick problem. What might help is working out the intro and slowly
build the pieces up on your standard 64 structure. I think that will
help you sync your kicks better as well, by hearing them slowly be
introduced rather than sit all going at once.

Anyway, i really like where it's going, the elements themselves are
nice, maybe a little on the vox sample might progress it. Can't wait
to hear the finished product. : ) -&rew